The tradition that the family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?
It is true that family members are spending less time on having meals with others these days. There are several reasons for this trend and it also causes some impacts on their daily life.
On the one hand, there are double main reasons why people trend to having lunch or dinner out. Firstly, it is the higher pressure at work that put employees in a tight budget of time for their meals. In deeds, with stronger competition at work, numerous workers are coping with workloads, letting them alone of having leisure time to enjoin dinners, or even though break first, at home. Secondly, the growth of fast food industry provides officers an easier access to save their eating time. Let’s take Vingroups as a stark example, had it not been for the convenience of quik - food order services/restaurants like Grab, KFC or MC Donand, thousands of Vingroup’s employees would have never met their needs of refresh the energy with only 1 hour break-time at noon.
On the other hand, this trend haves many impacts on human livings. The first effect is that it cultivates the isolation between family members. Undeniably, the less family members eating together, the more they become separated from others. Further and even more significantly, countless divorces are recorded as a result of husbands or wifes could not frequently cook at home. Besides, worker ‘s health deterioration is another consequence of eating out. On the ground of being heavily relied on fast foods or quik-restaurants, a large number of employees suffer from diseases such as obesity or problems relating to stomach.
In conclusion, that people spend less time to have meals with their family are becoming more and more remarkable. Many indicators take responsibilities for this trend and it haves a variety of impacts on human life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...lied on fast foods or quik-restaurants, a large number of employees suffer from diseases such as ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ves a variety of impacts on human life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7917060352 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9187042376 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100391658466 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411418648148 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332562118696 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808029085176 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380318102435 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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