Traffic and housing problem in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside.To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Concerning the matter of moving large companies and factories and theirs employees to the countryside, it believed that traffic and housing problem in major cities could be solved. As far as I am concerned, I do partially agree with the statement for several reasons which will be given out in this essay.
First of all, it can be said with certainty that relocating large companies and their employees to the countryside would help tackle the traffic jam problem. The key explanation is possibly because each big-size company may have thousands of staff members. They go to work and their children go to school during the rush hours. That lead to unbearable traffic congestion.
Second of all, a special consideration in this case is that moving to rural areas would help resolved the housing scarcity problem.The main basis is probably because at present, immigrants rush to cities and work in big factories so overpopulation make housing higher and higher. Moreover, high housing prices are caused not only by overpopulation but also real estate business and individuals also keep raising prices for profits.
In contrast, it must be admitted that settling in countryside would not solved the problem of traffic congestion. Most people would agree that medium-size and small-size enterprises would have a chance to expand so it is attracted more and more workers to return to urban areas. Besides, government could not solve housing scacrity since rural residents still rush to cities and willing to work in factories of any size provided that they find a job.
Taking everything into consideration,people have to weigh up in their thoughts to what extent this issue should be supported. However, the discussions are convincing enough to lead me to the conclusion that moving to rural areas is a good choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, may, moreover, second, so, still, in contrast, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13513513514 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89252329556 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577702702703 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8176447681 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.923076923 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381800342421 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122537470911 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130551580851 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195692168659 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113478606715 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.