Traffic congestion has become one of the major issues in cities. What are the problems people face due to traffic? Discuss the possible solutions of overcoming it ?
It is widely acknowledged that big cities were overpopulated, and traffic jam has been a significant issue among urban residents. In this essay, I will elaborate on these problems, and then propose a number of feasible methods to be adopted.
There are myriad problems that the major cities can deal with, the most significant of which are wasting precious time and health problems. With regard to the former, many human beings spend lots of time for waiting the heavy congestion when they go to work per day. For example, many workers wake up early in order to avoid the phenomenon of traffic jams, instead of spending more time on other tasks. When it comes to the latter, vehicle emissions are one of the most serious issues that dwellers have been suffering. For instance, tons of CO2 is released by vehicles per year leading to many resident’s death is lung illness.
Practical measures should be taken into consideration to alleviate such issues, associated with encouraging the use of transportation and enhancement awareness among individuals. In terms of the first point, if there is comfortable and cheap public transportation that could be the easiest way to solve this trouble. For instance, buses are the most convenient vehicle that helps a city to have a friendly environment on its road and streets during rush hour. As far as the second idea is concerned, residents should have the responsibility for protecting their health before they go out. A good example of this situation is wearing a face mask because it can prevent the harmful effects of heavy congestion in major cities resulting in decreasing the huge amount of lung illnesses.
In conclusion, there are good grounds for the fact that inhabitants are facing a wide range of problems in big cities, but the aforementioned approaches can mitigate the phenomenon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09180327869 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88568551047 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613114754098 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9423575868 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.461538462 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14063346816 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457452393907 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046662200789 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816592086718 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210410038564 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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