Joblessness is indeed a grave issue confronting industrialized nations nowadays. This phenomenon can be mitigated by lessening professional schedule to 35 hours which has the pros and cons as explained in this essay.
The first advantage of reducing working hours is having more chance to, especially, young people to become a part of work-life. People will have the opportunity to show their talents and abilities due to the necessity of extra workers. In addition, the number of people having the same job will also decrease spending time on deadlines, meetings or projects which create excessive stress over employees. Employees who are released from the stress show more productivity, commitment while boosting their motivation on their works which definitely also beneficial for companies not only to make more profitable but also to make them more successful in the business market. Importantly, people can use remained extra time from work for their pursuit of happiness either spending with their beloved ones or self-improvement such as learning a new language or their hobbies.
On the other hand, one should consider the drawbacks of this implementation. At first, as the number of employees is increasing, the salaries will certainly be affected by decreasing due to the fact that most companies calculate the salaries of employees per hour of work. The other disadvantage of this issue is the increase in competition about the job. Although workers assigned on the same project feel less stressful due to decreased workload, many become more competitive and aggressive to become more resident in the workplace in case of any economic crisis situation.
To conclude, in order to mitigate the unemployment problem, 35-hour work in a week can be one of the possible solutions that have the advantages and disadvantages to be considered by developed societies
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: crises'; cris's; crise's; crisis's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30976430976 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03084170296 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6370969559 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.416666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182337354482 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670922199773 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795467199258 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127222527185 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936653702666 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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