There is a controversial issue about how much freedom should be given to people about their lifestyles. Some might completely advocate of personal freedom, while the others support the government interferences on unhealthy lifestyle choices. In this essay, both side of views will be examined.
On one hand, people should be free about what to do with their own bodies including their lifestyles. Choosing junk food for each meal, consuming excessive amount of alcohol daily or smoking which are some deadly accustoms are examples of people’s habits. However, they are all personal choices as given totally free. Although these choices can be harmful for human body, people have their own minds to separate the right and wrong decisions and decide what they best for them. No one can put pressure on anybody’s choices to convert them into better ones such as pushing one to pass an active lifestyle like doing sport regularly instead of sedentary lifestyle or eating vegetables or quitting smoking.
On the other hand, some people think the governments should take measures regarding the healthy lifestyles of individuals not just to protect individual’s health but also for safety and continuum of next generation. Government should have to limit to consumption of processed food which include many different chemicals to be harmful human body in a long-term use such as fertilization and alcohols which also create some kind of addiction influencing the properly working of brains. To prevent unhealthy choices, governments can limit the use of them in different ways such as applying high taxes, increasing awareness with public with advert companies or building free help organizations to convince people to make difference on their lives. Encouragements from the government can be more effective and deterrent method about giving up of unhealthy habits of people for their safety.
To conclude, both views expressed in the question are correct. However, I believe that governments should have right to apply some implementations and take precautions about unhealthy habits to protect their now and future citizens. Still, people should have enough freedom to choice and decide about their lives without feeling any pressure form governments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to junk'
Suggestion: to junk
...es including their lifestyles. Choosing junk food for each meal, consuming excessive...
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Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...umption of processed food which include many different chemicals to be harmful human body in a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, still, while, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35014005602 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72998469239 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579831932773 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4663372851 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409605029643 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127644254557 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654717398322 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239700571404 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483568119971 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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