It is said that each major of tertiary studies ought to have a balanced number of male and female students. This essay disagrees with this statement. Firstly, this essay will discuss the university’s entrance criteria and secondly, discuss the effects of the lack of professionals on the society as a whole.
In order to be accepted for university studies, there are qualifications which need to be met, such as academic performances and willingness to follow those studies. Undergraduates should have the possibility to chose which major they want to pursue based on their options and examination results, and not to be influenced by gender criteria. For example, it is known that the number of female teachers is higher compared with men teachers, and, at the same time, Engineering is a career chosen mostly be men.
Society would be affected by the decreased number of professionals. Restricting university students to follow the desired specialization means that some of them would refuse to start a program that they do not feel passionate about it or even not being able to participate in a program because they have the “wrong sex”. This would reflect in a small number of future professionals, which would affect the job market and the entire society. For instance, the childcare sector would have to downsize their center due to the insufficient number of child educators, which would have serious repercussions on the entire society.
In conclusion, academic requirements ought to influence university’s acceptances because the reduced level of specialized people would reflect important drawbacks on the whole society.
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- All societies have their own music and art. In what way are music and art important for society and for the individual? 56
- Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 56
- Playing a musical instrument is the most important achievement for any child.Personal Opinion, agree or disagree? 84
- Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...;wrong sex'. This would reflect in a small number of future professionals, which would affec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38846153846 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18180849918 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7905653869 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.363636364 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127042790259 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486036106016 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301221828664 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740979956405 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0082597372742 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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