Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
About the universities should accept the same number of male and female students in every subject, it obviously brings different arguments from people, whether they agree or disagree. However, I totally agree with this statement for the following reasons.
On the one hand, having the same number of men and women in one class will make communication better. Surveys found that classes with combined students mostly more active, rather than the classes that only filled with men or women. As an instance, females will feel awkward to start a conversation to male, and vice versa, especially if they are a minority in the class. Another point is that students can have more friends, not only with the same gender, but also with the different gender. It has been proven by some experts that students in the mixed class mostly have extensive friendship.
On the other hand, the task that is given by the teacher to the students can be well-finished. Recent studies show that female students are more diligent than the male ones. Hence, a task that is done by both genders usually has a better score, rather than it is done by the male only or the female only. Combining the male and female into one class can also decrease the bullying problem. Based on research, bullies are caused by several reasons, such as being a minority in the classes.
In summary, it seems to me that the universities must make every class subject with the similar number of male and female students because it will make the class become more active and all the tasks could be finished well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one class', 'a class', or simply 'class'?
Suggestion: one class; a class; class
...nly. Combining the male and female into one class can also decrease the bullying problem....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, well, in summary, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81918819188 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37987069702 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535055350554 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3351148054 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150496144908 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589372973736 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629374187849 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119670869967 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725746862169 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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