Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While a total people think that universities should reqest corresponding proposition men and women sudents in every field. In my opinion, I agree with it.
On the one hand, the gender imbalance is getting worse and worse consequently the number of male student in most of educational institutions are much more than female students. Therefor, academy recruiters should agree the number of male and female students equally consequently both of them can have the same right opportunities to follow higher education which will make women have a chance to attend in more fields in now day life like doctor or engginner and if females hold the essential sectors in a company or in a country, this will give them an opportunity to compete with men
On the other hand, gender balance will helps students get on well with other genders in a class or at shool also this will reduce gender discrimination, especially among women who be overlooked and merely do the house work every day while the men go out to work and become a bread winner in one century ago on a contrary now with equal number of each gender and the same education as well, women can learn and contribute as much as men or even more for their country and society.
In conclusion, a number of universities should try a new way of recruiting to eliminate gender imbalance from shools and also helps female have a chance to show their ability and towards equality in all aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, so, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74103585657 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68370390146 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565737051793 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 308.438259624 49.4020404114 624% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 238.0 106.682146367 223% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.2 20.7667163134 242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.8 7.06120827912 280% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215102148674 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117080388772 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307380377021 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133384106106 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401960659129 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.0 13.0946893788 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.1 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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