wild animal
It is argued that protecting endangered species is a waste of resources because there is no suitable land in the 21st century. In my view, I disagree that animal protection is a waste of resources. Firstly, this essay will discuss the benefits of wildlife and second, how humans should help by stopping forest trees and building industries or factories in forested areas. .
The main idea of forest conservation is that it attracts as a favorite tourist destination for many families, allowing them to see different types of animals in one place. In most countries, Wildlife is a growing national asset. In addition, the revenue from this can be used to maintain the forest and help buy food or essentials for the animals. For example, the Vandaloor Zoo in Chennai is visited by the majority of visitors during April to June and it helps the government generate greater revenue.
People play an important role in the process of modernizing the world today. They often tend to cut down forest trees and build factories because there is a lot of space. Because the number of this species is decreasing day by day. It helps detect large earthquakes and irregularities. In addition, Leather and wool are made of animal skins. For example, in India The majority of leather products are exported around the world, thus increasing their popularity.
In conclusion, Wildlife should be conserved for their primary interests. Wild animals attract as a tourist attraction because of their attractive giant appearance. Deforestation needs to be significantly reduced to support animal conservation.
- social 11
- job 56
- Wild animals have no place in the 21st century so protecting them is a waste of resources To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- It is thought that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
...ustries or factories in forested areas. . The main idea of forest conservati...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...in forested areas. . The main idea of forest conservation is that it attracts ...
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Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tories because there is a lot of space. Because the number of this species is decreasin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20542635659 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94019943838 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4776172718 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9375 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171128627642 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527275218271 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836187443197 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103997054032 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842295611795 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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