The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
On these days, social media has gradually become a useful tool in most areas of life. While I accept this trend would bring great benefits, I would argue that it could not be comparable to in-person meetings.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that the use of social media has changed the world in positive ways. From the perspective of communication, people might easily keep in touch with their friends or relatives with the help of a range of Internet platforms despite the long distance between them. Thus, it might facilitate maintaining strong relationship over time. In regard to business, social media is considered as an effective way of increasing brand visibility. Any companies could create content on their official Facebook pages, it would probably attract attention of potential customers.
On the other hand, I believe that this trend has some notable disadvantages that make it impossible to replace face-to-face interaction. Firstly, those who spend a lot of time using social media platforms would be unable to develop some communication skills. In particular, when speaking directly, people might face difficulty either reading the meaning of someone’s face expression or using body languages in appropriate context, which are considered distinctive features of face-to-face interaction. Secondly, it is important to note that social media is a virtual world, so some people might take advantage of this to cheat each other. In fact, there are currently an increasing number of Facebook users reporting being charged with credit-card fraud to police.
In conclusion, it seems to me that face-to-face interaction would probably be an indispensable part in our life, although the using of social media, along with the advance in technology, also proves to be a positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34385964912 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00033854661 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6399285827 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.153846154 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288772853193 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927222465878 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820956999101 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163049605901 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905423249643 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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