As well as making money,also business have social responsibilities.Do you agree or disagree?
It is universally acknowledged that every successful businessman has lots of responsibilities.Nowadays, the majority of people are doing social services to improve the image of their country.Well, I vehemently agree with the above said notion.
To begin with, there are multifarious viewpoints to support my belief.Firstly, in this modern scenario the businessman is educated and contributing 10 percent of the shares for social works.For example, investing money in the areas where the development is in slow progress.This can be the result of better transportation system, high quality education, so on. Secondly, the majority of business people are giving their shares in charities that are helping various people in treating diseases which are not treated due to lack of money.For instance, cancer, tumour, so on. Last but not least, when a country suffers from low gross development progress, then traders are the one who comes in front same as helping hand of legislatives.Hence, traders are providing money to banks and by providing jobs to the masses who have lost their job due to economic crisis in companies.
In addition to this, nowadays all multinational companies are following the saying that ''Say no to polythenes''.However, a large number of industries have banned the poly bags to save planet Earth, therefore, due to this global warming ratio has been declining, whereas from this decision numerous animals are saved because when animals graze poly bags instead of grass they are dying within 2 to 3 days.Although, in any type of work, family does not matter. Lets take an example, Bill gates founder of Microsoft his one day net worth is 2millions while he is providing 90 percent of his salary to charities and legislatives across the world to provide their Denizens comfort and peace.
In conclusion, although companies should prioritise the need to make profits, I believe they should also have social responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29126213592 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3439144593 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644012944984 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.3942507031 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 233.571428571 106.682146367 219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.1428571429 20.7667163134 213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.1428571429 7.06120827912 356% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149223986015 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672407472873 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563582869949 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995101583081 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573585469674 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 13.0946893788 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.29 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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