As well as making money, businesses also have social
responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that the functions of enterprises are not only earning money but also social responsibilities. In my opinion, while generating profit is the mission which companies care the most, I agree that they should spend attention on helping people and saving the environment.
On the one hand, even maximizing profit of companies still give society the benefit. First, by trying to do this, corporations will be able to make more revenue, thereby paying more taxes to the government. This means that authorities may have more money to spend on society, such as education and health care, which result in an improvement in the quality of citizens’ life. Second, since the companies grow their business, they are required to recruit a large number of employees, which means that many job opportunities will be created. Evidence of this can be seen with Google that has approximately 100.000 employees that creates job opportunities not only in the USA but also in many countries.
On the other hand, there are strong reasons why businesses should also accept that they have social responsibilities. The first reason is that their activities have an effect on the environment. Corporations may emit exhaust industrial waste which harms the environment when producing goods and this has resulted in global warming or endangered species. A clear illustration of this is that Formusa company thrown toxic into the South China Sea, causing the death of a huge number of fishes and putting the life of fishermen in jeopardy. Another reason is that enterprises have the ability to help people who are less fortunate. For example, in order to help poor people, big corporations can make philanthropic actions such as providing scholarships or giving charitable donations, which makes their life become easier.
In conclusion, although generating profit is the top priority for each company, I strongly believe that companies should profoundly reflect upon their social responsibilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... business, they are required to recruit a large number of employees, which means that many job op...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33544303797 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01685034363 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585443037975 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0391849523 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.428571429 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134307653633 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456621505226 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428616819619 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703491724342 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421704953311 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.