Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
In the history of humankind, both the governments and private corporations carried out scientific research across the world. While some people believe that companies should be totally in charge in these research, I think that the governments will take care of this better.
Instead of private companies, the government should be responsible for scientific research. The most important factor is that money has never been a problem of states. By earning much money through many methods such as taxes and business, the governments have an annual income, thereby not worrying about financial issues. This means that solving social problems will be prioritized instead of maximizing profits which is the main purpose of private companies. The governments will concentrate on problems, which are serious to humankind and the Earth but can not earn much profits by solving these like inventing new potions to cure rare diseases, and sell it with a lower price than corporations’ to poor patients. Moreover, the results of these research will not be kept as a secret but widely publicized so that not only citizens of these countries but also every people on the world, especially developing countries, can use it to improve their life.
There are two reasons why the private sector should not undertake scientific research. First, the main purpose of them is maximizing profits, not solving problems of humankind. This is an indication that they are willing to cheat their customers by selling fake medicines to earn money. A clear illustration of this is that Pharma, which is a famous medical company in Vietnam, sold a huge amount of medicine to treat cancer but the police found out that it has no function at all. Second, the effect of results which is provided by that scientific research may be out of our hand. For example, there is a Chinese scientist who changed human gene to make us be invulnerable to HIV but most of scientists in the world agreed that we can not control the effect of this research at this time.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that it is better if the government is responsible in scientific research than private companies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...umankind and the Earth but can not earn much profits by solving these like inventing...
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Line 5, column 686, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the scientists') or simply say ''most scientists''.
Suggestion: most of the scientists; most scientists
...e to make us be invulnerable to HIV but most of scientists in the world agreed that we can not con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05027932961 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8015854656 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54748603352 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8113489056 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.533333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331801550619 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127157283683 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12604939027 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251722796533 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765602549892 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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