As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibility towards society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There has been an increasingly popularised opinion that businesses should make social contributions within their reasonable purview. I completely endorse this statement for the following reasons.
Initially, charitable donations can help bolster the firm’s public image and build its brand. If a business is willingly cooperating with the local governments to handle existing environmental issues like water pollution, and constant congestion, it is likely to receive legal support from the authorities. For example, a company that manufactures wood furniture can obtain government approval to cut down trees faster. It can increase customer satisfaction by completing the work ahead of schedule, resulting in customer loyalty. The business can either make a charitable donation or holding a staff volunteer program.
Additionally, as environmental issues have become more serious, customers will alter their buying habits. The business can take advantage of this opportunity to introduce environmentally-friendly products to draw the shopper’s attention and retain them, which is essential for a financial institution’s long-term success. There have been a myriad of successful enterprises that foresee this situation and take a step ahead of their opponents, like Vinfast with cars powered by electricity, and Nestcafe with straws made of paper rather than normal plastic ones. All of them soon become popular among customers, bringing huge revenue to the business.
In conclusion, I believe that the business corporation's responsibility also includes social contributions for cultivating positive brand recognition and increasing sales. It is recommended that the government apply several measures to get business corporations to alleviate social issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'corporations'' or 'corporation's'?
Suggestion: corporations'; corporation's
...conclusion, I believe that the business corporations responsibility also includes social con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05158730159 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38470197846 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686507936508 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6676889306 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.307692308 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0963425513418 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332442823851 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354826194223 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615591457913 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236249189044 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.81 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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