When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that salary is the first priority for job seekers when they decide to start a career. While I accept that this is true for some people, I think that there are several factors as important as the salary to consider a job.
On the one hand, there are good reasons to choose a job based on salary. First of all, wage usually plays as a majority part of income and decides the level of life. A high salary will allow employees to meet their basic human needs such as a big house, luxurious cars or up-to-date clothes. Secondly, a competitive salary reflects the employee’s ability. High qualified candidates will surely refuse an offer if it’s wage is not equivalent to his qualifications.
On the other hand, there are a variety of crucial factors that make a person to select a job. One of these is the opportunity to progress in the career. For example, a job with lower wage originally but will bring a lot of chances to promote in the future may attract more applicants than a high-salary job but be stationary. In addition, the suitability of the working environment with the employee’s character is extremely necessary for a large number of people. If they passionate to work with people, they will never accept a lonely job in remote areas no matter how high the salary is.
In conclusion, money plays an important role when choosing a job, but it is not the key consideration for everyone in making a career decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...;s character is extremely necessary for a large number of people. If they passionate to work with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74609375 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81830726411 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3335061709 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4615384615 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195095595853 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695252063708 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596277135967 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135545455443 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456684124231 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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