when design a building, the most important factor is intend use of the building rather than its outward appearance. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that many people suppose that the utilitarian function should be a foundation in architectural design. While buildings must serve a specific purpose, I disagree that this is the most important factor.
The intent purpose is, of course, significant feature which designer should consider when construct new buildings. In term of commercial designs, the shop façade, for instance, often be equipped with large transparent glass windows in order to attract passer-by to their products on display. However, those kind of shop front is an eyesore because they fail to blend in with other traditional designs which have been grown organically, maybe for centuries. From housing designs perspective, in many megacities nowadays, the population density has reached dramatic number, which force the house rent charging for the land increase to outrageous price. As a result, rise- high buildings become the only solution for urban dwellers.
While, architectural design must serve specific function, I personally think that the aesthetic aspect should not be underestimated. Many countries around the world have revived inhabitant’s interest in traditional designs. Although, utilitarian buildings such as multi-storey parks are inevitable result from modern lifestyle, new and renovated houses, shops and offices can combine with useful function as well as pleasing designs. in cities like Paris for example, historic dwellings not only possess character but also give a strong sense of identity of those cities.
In conclusion, I disagree the function of architectural designs should be the first priority when people plan to construct buildings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 301, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
... to their products on display. However, those kind of shop front is an eyesore because the...
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Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, of course, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67469879518 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97593342315 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4119976093 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126418093279 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503006395621 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588627902922 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969709466449 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527577088378 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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