Which do you prefer to buy new technological devices immediately after they become available or to wait till many people have adopted them

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 692, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... the PS5 sales event; because there are a large number of people who want to buy the new technolo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, incidentally, look, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, while, in summary, by and large, by the same token, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 41.998997996 212% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2822.0 1615.20841683 175% => OK
No of words: 554.0 315.596192385 176% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09386281588 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85151570047 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98497455843 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 176.041082164 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494584837545 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 946.8 506.74238477 187% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0499277654 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3103448276 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1034482759 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13793103448 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358217613827 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834025936939 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113968031431 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198139451915 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10694439099 0.056905535591 188% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.