Which do you prefer, to buy new technological devices immediately after they become available or to wait till many people have adopted them?
The way to avoid mortifying failures in our choices has become the topic of great controversy in recent years. There is a considerable body of opinion that holds it betters to wait till many people have adopted new technological devices before you afford to it. This paper will elucidate the reasons why I am in favor of this opinion.
On one hand, failure avoidance and effective time management are what I consider a crucial factor. It is noteworthy that waiting till many people have adopted new products before purchasing is synonymous with receiving a review from many users who have already bought the new technological devices. Thanks to this, we are likely to obtain multifarious information from plenty of websites. Accordingly, we are capable of ensuring the authenticity and utility of the device. With this in mind, we stand a golden chance to gain more sense of reassurance. Eventually, this probably gives rise to failure avoidance. More notably, based on my experience from the PS5 sales event; because there are a large number of people who want to buy the new technological devices immediately after they become available, while we are waiting till many people have adopted, avoiding a crowd of people is inevitable. In the event of this, there is a likelihood for us to purchase new technological devices more smoothly and time-effective. On the ground of that, it is possible for us to save time and use our spare time effectively to do something else. During this process, we are prone to have a felicitous choice for time management. Under those circumstances, it makes it feasible for us to live optimistically. Given these points, waiting till many people have adopted new products greatly contributes to effective time management.
On the other hand, some people express a different view that waiting till others have adopted new products discourages them from a lot of excitements. As a consequence, it creates a huge burden on our positive feelings. Although that might be true, it is just applicable to a minority. We have already well thought about the plan. Incidentally, there is a certain purposefulness about waiting till others have adopted new products. Therefore, it is unlikely that waiting before purchasing new products prevent us from being excited in big sales event. Another point often overlooked is that even if the loss of excitement does exist, it should be considered as the chance for us to purchase new technological devices with higher accuracy and efficiency. By the same token, we have an inclination to avert the unexpected repercussions caused by mechanical trouble. By virtue of this, we are given the opportunity to observe the frugality in the expenditure of money, which creates a significant impact on the pecuniary profit. Beyond any doubt, they tend to be more motivated and inspired in daily life. This, indeed, empowers us to ameliorate the quality of works and ramp up production capacity. By and large, people should put off the idea that waiting till others have adopted new products discourages them from a lot of excitement.
In summary, failure avoidance and effective time management are the convincing reasons for my approval. It is my hope that people take this writing into great consideration to gather diverse perspectives on the issue regarding the way to avoid mortifying failures in our choices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 692, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... the PS5 sales event; because there are a large number of people who want to buy the new technolo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, incidentally, look, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, while, in summary, by and large, by the same token, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 41.998997996 212% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2822.0 1615.20841683 175% => OK
No of words: 554.0 315.596192385 176% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09386281588 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85151570047 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98497455843 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 176.041082164 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494584837545 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 946.8 506.74238477 187% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0499277654 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3103448276 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1034482759 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13793103448 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358217613827 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834025936939 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113968031431 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198139451915 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10694439099 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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