While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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It is a common belief that global warming is the fundamental contribution to our environment, whereas other people think tree clearance has more influence on our global. I would argue that both are important issues caused seriously various effects that must be immediately tackled.
On the one hand, it is believed that global warming causes the pressing problems. First and foremost, the temperature is more and more rising because the emissions of gases such as CO2 trap heat from the sun, creating the known as greenhouse effect. As a result, it is affecting the climate and the habitat of people and wildlife. For example, some researchers show that as temperatures change, ice is melting worldwide and this causes polar bears will soon starve due to walking or swimming long distances to get to the remaining ice and wait for seals. Furthermore, precipitation has increased across the worldwide on average caused floods in some areas due to the climate change, while some extent regions are experiencing severe drought with no raining.
On the other hand, most of endangered species have been teetering on the verge of extinction due to the deforestation. Because the animals will have to find another environment to live and adapt with that, but not any species can do it, and then they will gradually be starved to death. Additionally, when the forests are cut down, it makes the people’s habitation increasingly vulnerable. For example, when it is raining heavily, flooding is likely to occur and soil slides down as well because there are any trees to absorb and hold it, so it is extremely dangerous for people living near.
In conclusion, it is clear that both above issues are the source of the disastrous consequences. Hence, we should take actions instantly to address deforestation and global warming at the same time.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07565789474 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81252693123 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611842105263 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9679380099 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.692307692 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213295552504 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695721104009 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562110409682 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125442804426 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457894941699 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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