The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Why is it the case? Can you suggest some ways to prepare people to work in the future?
These days, the world of work is quickly becoming changable, hence humans also need to change and evolve to meet the demands of modern society as well as adapt to the changing ways of working and living. In this essay, I will discuss the possible reasons for these changes and suggest some ways for people to prepare for their future careers.
Firstly, having said that development of hi-tech machines is becoming more and more popular. Thousands of automatic devices are manufactured. This, somehow, can cause workers to lose their jobs as they are replaced by automated processes. Therefore, the boss can reduce the amount paid to workers. Moreover, some large companies have devised some methods to deal with the ever-increasing desire to cut expenses and increase profits. For example, Apple specializes in manufacturing and selling technology devices. Instead of manufacturing in their country, they will build factories in poor countries and hire low-paid workers.
However, there are several ways to assist people to prepare for their workplaces in the future. Students who are ready to leave school should be advised about the sustainability of their career path. To guide them on which job to seek and vice versa, it is important to explain what job they should seek. For example, these days, more and more apps appear for teaching purposes, like ChatGPT, which is supported by Al technology. This helps people find all the information they need. It may eventually replace the teacher. As a result, students evaluate the job they would like to do and look into it. Besides that, people need to keep up with the developing world full of technology, by learning the use of technology.
To conclude, to follow the rapid changes in the world, people need to prepare their perceptive to face with them.
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- You work in a busy but poorly organised office and you are keen to be promoted Your employer needs to find a new supervisor for your department Write a letter to your employer In the letter ask to be considered for this job explain why you would be a suit 84
- Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 61
- In the future it is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people in some countries Is this positive or negative development 56
- Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 11
- Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements and this sets a bad example to young people 56
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... people need to prepare their perceptive to face with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, hence, however, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09364548495 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6884764697 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2742314874 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.533333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240597212124 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600266368457 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060421272718 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154797541747 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888493209215 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.