Write about the following topic:
The large number of private cars on the roads in many parts of the world has led to serious problems of pollution and may contribute to global warming. Some people think that governments should spend money for the development of public transportation systems in order to help solve this problem. Others think it is better to spend money for the development of electric and other types of cars that may cause less ,:; ,flution.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience
Growth of personal vehicle is sharply increase in half a decade. Most of household have minimum 1 private transportation like car or motorcycle. However, government nowadays spend a lot of money to reduce the main problem there is pollution. There are 2 options that government need to consider, first build new public transportation and second developing the rechargeable automobile.
The advancement of public transportation could easily reduce the main problem. This transportation can also help individuals to go to another place in a cheaper price, conversely, most of society still want to use their own automobile. By using own car, we can go everywhere and anywhere easily and efficiently.
On the other hand, the improvement of renewable technology could be implemented in public transportation like bus or train. These changes can help the government to reduce air pollution. It can become the alternative way for people to use own electric car or bus depends on their preference.
It is a nice idea to improve the quality of automobiles in the world, but i think people still want to use their own car for their mobility. Public transportation only can be used for outcomes and the one who do not want to drive by own.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
Growth of personal vehicle is sharply increase in half a decade. Most of household hav...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...uality of automobiles in the world, but i think people still want to use their ow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, second, so, still, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07352941176 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17075784406 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7520324532 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.25 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110966198903 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458696394603 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432993909254 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736437060197 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319004306252 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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