Write an essay (from 180 to 250 words) about the advantages of travelling.
For years, people have been travelling on holidays or special occasions either to other parts of their country or overseas. To the best of my knowledge, the primary benefits of this activity are its profound influences on our ways of thinking and its assistance in our process of self-improvement.
To commence with, taking trips can change what we think of life and our attitude towards it. When going far away, we get to meet people that not only live in different places but also belong to various cultures. As a result, there is no doubt that they have mindsets dissimilar to ours. By dint of having conversations, interacting with them, we are able to abolish our flawed and old-fashioned prejudices, alter them with more comprehensive ones. For instance, we may realise how crucial it is to be less indifferent to others' struggles, or it may dawn on us that wherever we go, kindness and sympathy are existent. Thus, we are encouraged to treat others in a decent way or to look on the bright side of life.
In addition, travelling allows us to enhance ourselves. In other words, it is conducive to our identifying our strengths and weaknesses. During our journeys, a wide range of activities such as deciding the destinations and which hotel to stay at, or asking strangers for information about directions, local traditions, etc are to be done. As we carry out these steps of having a vacation, we can recognise whether we are good at making decisions, planning, communicating or not and know what skills we are lacking, therefore improving our shortcomings. To exemplify, if we find ourselves having difficulty talking to strangers, we should make efforts to meet new people and make new friends more frequently.
To summarise, it is apparent from the preceding paragraphs that travelling provides us with opportunities to reevaluate our view of life and to turn ourselves into better individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05721234166 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623824451411 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8230875463 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.928571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.037300697331 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0161724566548 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274573449704 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0337461618866 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287340366775 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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