Write an essay to say whether you agree or disagree with the idea that shopping in supermarkets is good for people today.
Nowadays, the diverse development of goods has provided consumers with many choices. More people now are still buying products in outdoor markets. Many people think that shopping in supermarkets is much better. I strongly agree with this. I think that it is a big issue because it has effective on our health.
Firstly, buying products in supermarkets will help customers feel secure about the quality of products.Goods in supermarkets are always checked for quality, origin ... before importing.In addition, fresh foods such as vegetables, fish meat are kept cold, safe, sanitary and clean. If vegetables, fruits are withered or crushed, the staff will immediately exchange new goods for the buyer to choose.
Secondly, you don't have to pay a price. When you go shopping in the supermarket, the most comfortable thing is that the price doesn't have to be paid because the supermarket has listed the price on the product or on the front of the store. You can freely choose the products that suit your family's budget without paying the price or face the annoying attitude of the seller.
Finally, shopping supermarket will be convenient and save time for buyers.At the supermarket, buying goods is very fast and saves time because the goods are classified, logical subdivision, scientific price to help you quickly find the goods you need and related items. Unlike in the market, you have to spend a lot of time looking for items to buy, sometimes still out of stock, and then have to queue up to wait.The products at the supermarket are arranged and displayed scientifically on supermarket shelves and are related to each other, so you can easily find and buy yourself the products quickly. Different from the traditional market, you have to squeeze and the smell of goods and stinking of the market rises, in the supermarket you can freely choose goods in a clean and airy space. When going to the market, you will have to pay for parking once for shopping and for supermarkets when you enter.
In conclusion, shopping in supermarkets is good for people today. It is very suitable for us in modern society and development. People will buy quality products, convient and save time and they do not have to pay the price. It is a wise and safe choice for human health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, then, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9296875 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72101198521 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505208333333 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.277170775 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6315789474 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306401017679 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109147895815 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949424045459 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172108291042 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565299163393 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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