Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty
In contemporary society, the use of death penalty to punish people who commit murder, violence, etc. is a controversial issue. Some support death penalty for violent offenders. Others say that punishment is inherently unacceptable in contemporary society.
On the one hand, the death penalty is the highest sanction in the penalty frame. It is the appropriate punishment for violent offenders to return justice to the victim and uphold justice. In addition, it also shows the legal deterrence to society, preventing and eliminating crimes, reducing crime rates and acts of violence to a minimum. Moreover, the death penalty can guarantee that crimes or extremely dangerous members will never have the opportunity to cause any more crimes against humanity, contributing to maintaining order and safe for society.
On the other hand, the death penalty is not really a right punishment. Firstly, it is a terrible and barbaric punishment for robbing a human of his life and right to life. No matter how sinful the person is, we cannot take their lives, as an indirect way of killing, because everyone has the right to life. Second, if a person were executed, he would never have the opportunity to repent and correct his mistakes. Besides, relatives of the offender will also suffer the pain of losing loved ones.
In conclusion, maintaining or abolishing the death penalty remains a controversial question. However, after the advantages and disadvantages stated. I think we should consider it carefully before giving the death penalty to any criminal because in addition to the punishment of the law, we need to promote education and humanity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25757575758 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91479672446 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2663662132 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415385467887 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132323046715 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116303420075 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258429569398 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150134144088 0.056905535591 264% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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