Write a paragraph about your accomlishment you have had
My success as to be at the top of class help me develop many important qualities. First of all, I've got a highly developed my sense of confidence. Since I was little child, I was naturally getting shy. Because I was really not good in studying at my primary school, I didn't make a friend with anyone in my class and talk to them. But my life has changed when I went to Hồ chí minh city and began a new life at a high school which is near my living area. I was determined to study very hard to be at the top of my class. And, eventually I made it at the end of the first year, I was in the first class. I was so proud of myself while I talked to my accomplishment with my classmate that makes me have lots of friends. Furthermore, It can't be denied that the persistent is one of factors for my success. During the award ceremony, I remembered the time how hard I tried when I was studying by myself at home. I just spent three hours on sleeping at every night, at times I wanted to give it up, but on the second thought I still keep going. After that success, I realised that people might be developed our good characters through resolving difficulties to carry out goals in the life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...many important qualities. First of all, Ive got a highly developed my sense of conf...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ood in studying at my primary school, I didnt make a friend with anyone in my class a...
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Line 1, column 734, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e have lots of friends. Furthermore, It cant be denied that the persistent is one of...
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Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...e have lots of friends. Furthermore, It cant be denied that the persistent is one of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, really, second, so, still, while, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11637931034 5.12529762239 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47213588949 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599137931034 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9783204406 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.5833333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00894717287222 0.244688304435 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00368019466188 0.084324248473 4% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0122058248489 0.0667982634062 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00894717287222 0.151304729494 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.62 12.4159519038 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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