You should spend 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Most people do not care enough about environment issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In contemporary society, there has been a growing debate about environment problems. Many adopt a view that most individuals are not concerned about problems related to environment. From my perspective, I partly agree with the given idea, and I will provide explanations throughout the course of this essay to support my viewpoint.
Obviously, there are two reasons for the awareness of environmental protection is low among the older. Firstly, people think environmental problems will not affect society for another 50 years. In addition, people do not understand enough about environmental issues. For instance, many people are not fully understand about global warming and pollution. Consequently, problems related to environment is ignored.
However, thanks to the internet, young generations have much better understanding of the problems through information and evidences. Furthermore, the youth are taught and prepared on pollution compared to the prepious generation. Moreover, they get more knowledge more easily than before from the network platforms. Therefore, they raise a better awareness of environmental issues.
In conclusion, the fact that the awareness of environmental protection is low among the most people has raised a controversy and drawn the public’s interest. Personally, while I agree with the idea that not everyone considers environment, but I am part of the younger generation, the future generation, so I always protect and support the protection of the environment globally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75111111111 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24787033737 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591111111111 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5602214395 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4285714286 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151166413313 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538619341475 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508777512472 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884992469422 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633599150847 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.