You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news in newspapers and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
In recent years, there has been a great debate about whether the news has an impact on people's lives or not. Some people think that there is no relation between news and their lives since there are always issues about rich people such as politicians and entrepreneurs. Others, on the other hand, believe that the news plays an important role in our lives. this essay will illustrate both viewpoints surrounding this issue before coming to a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, there are some people who hold the view that the news is nothing connecting with our reality. These people present several arguments, but the most persuasive one is perhaps that there is so many news about wealthiness people such as crimes of politicians and embezzlement of entrepreneurs. The public cannot emphasize that unreality information and they would avoid to watch it since then.
Despite the former arguments, others believe that the news is a huge impact on our lives. One of the most convincing arguments they insist that there is a lot of useful information such as weather, national disaster and current affairs and people can be prepared or warned in advance to the circumstances. To illustrate, people can protect themselves from the pandemic virus by watching the news and the methods of protection will be broadcast on the news all the time. As well as this, these people believe that those who read the newspaper every day have a good quality of literary skill. This is evidenced by the fact that many professionals such as professors, doctors, scientists read the newspaper every morning to know what happened in the world.
To sum up, it can be observed that there are two contradicting viewpoints in relation to the news. To choose which side I am on, I believe that news offers informative contents to the public although there is often senseless information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 357, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...suasive one is perhaps that there is so many news about wealthiness people such as c...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...suasive one is perhaps that there is so many news about wealthiness people such as crimes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, well, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96496815287 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74344342106 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53821656051 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3036971829 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.357142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299086798083 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102825534304 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635497155556 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179917858045 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559672246737 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.