You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
NOWADAYS MANY PRODUCTS HAVE BECOME Well-received DUE TO THEIR ADVERTISEMENT POWRESS, NOT FOR THE QUALITY OR THE NECESSITY THEY OFFER TO THE COMMUNITY.
IN MODERN ERA, ADVERTISING IS SIMILAR TO BRANDING ONE'S PRODUCT. MANY SOCIAL NETWORKING SITES ARE USED TO REACH THE CONSUMERS AND BRING OUT THE NUMBER OF SALE. NEWS OF DISCOUNT AND FREE GIVEAWAYS ARE CONSIDERED AS SELLING APPROACHES BY MANY COMPANIES. LIVE VIDEOS ON YOUTUBE OR FACEBOOK ALONG WITH PRODUCT PLACEMENT IN MOVIES OR DRMAS ARE SIMILAR TO MARKETING STRATEGIES. MANY BRAND PLAN OUT ADVERTISEMENT LIKE A DRAMA OR ADD A PLOT TWIST TO APPEAL TO THE WATCHERS AND ENVOKE THEM TO BUY AND USE THEIR GOODS. WATCHING SUCH FORM OF DISPLAY OFTEN MISLEAD THE USERS ABOUT THE COMMODITY THEY ARE ABOUT TO BUY. FURTHERMORE, NO MATTER HOW GOOD THEIR TACTICS BECOME, UNFORTUNATELY, THE QUALITY OF SOME PRODUCTS NEVER REACH THE DESIRED LEVEL.
FOR EXAMPLE, AARONG IS CONSIDERED ONE OF THE BEST CLOTHING BRAND IN BANGLADESH WHICH ONLY HAS ONE YEAR-END SALE. HOWEVER, THEIR POPULARITY DECREASED AS THEY WENT INTO A CONTROVERSY FOR INCREASING THEIR PRICE AS FESTIVALS APPROACHED. BATA, A ONCE POPULAR SHOE BRAND LOSTS ITS CONSUMERS AS THE QUALITY OF THE SHOES REDUCED. BUT THESE INCIDENTS DID NOT DETER THE COMPANIES FROM APPEARING IN MEDIA.
ON THE OTHER HAND, YOU WILL FIND MANY START-UPS THAT CAN NOT EVEN OPEN THEIR BUSINESSES PROPERLY AS THEY DO NOT GET A OPEN SLOT FOR ADVERTISEMENT IN NATIONAL TELEVISION OR NEWSPAPER. MANY LOCAL SHOPS OFFER BETTER QUALITY PRODUCTS AT A CHEAPER RATE, BUT LACK THE POPULARITY THE DESERVE.
SO IN THE END, THE ESSAY FULLY AGREES WITH THE STATEMENT THAT POPULAR PRODUCTS ARE NOT NECESSARILY QUALITY PRODUCTS.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: One's
...ERA, ADVERTISING IS SIMILAR TO BRANDING ONES PRODUCT. MANY SOCIAL NETWORKING SITES A...
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Line 7, column 274, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...A CHEAPER RATE, BUT LACK THE POPULARITY THE DESERVE. SO IN THE END, THE ESSAY FULLY AGRE...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, so, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11151079137 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76032440454 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622302158273 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4147355362 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.7333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120499274743 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367476976811 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266848605686 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648642004107 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247569610249 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.