You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
People have different views about being the host country of an international sport. While some argue that it would be extremely beneficial for a nation when hosting a sports event, I suppose that it may result in some negative impacts as well.
There are numerous reasons why people support the idea of being the host country for international sports events. For instance, when a well-known sport event is held in a country, more people around the world will take notice of that country. As a result, it may successfully create better opportunities for that nation to establish more relationships with other countries. In the future, a nation can benefit from being a collaborator of rich nations, which leads to the development of the whole country in terms of economics, especially tourism due to the increase of foreign visitors. Furthermore, its citizens will have more choices of places to export and import goods and stuff.
In spite of these arguments, I personally agree that hosting an event, especially an international event may have some detrimental effects on the country.In spite of these arguments, I personally agree that hosting an event, especially an international event may have some detrimental effects on the country. It is clear that to achieve success in organizing an international sports event, the host country has to make use of all resources to guarantee that all facilities must meet the standard of an international event which is very huge and professional. That process can take a lot of time and money then result in unbalanced economic development due to lack of financial investment for other industries, especially with normal and poor countries. Moreover, after completing the event, all the stadiums can be unoccupied and not used for its intended purpose, so all costs and efforts to build them become wasteful.
In conclusion, I believe that hosting an international sports event can help the country gain some benefits, but it can be worse for a country in some other perspectives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... beneficial for a nation when hosting a sports event, I suppose that it may result in ...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...some detrimental effects on the country.In spite of these arguments, I personally ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, as to, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1419939577 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99611989445 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492447129909 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8297412766 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.833333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275338757697 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116047356006 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937640721252 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205499137242 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643728644726 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.