You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
To be the home country for such an international sports event like the Olympics or World Cup is a neverending and competitive race. Some people think that hosting an international event is a big opportunity for a boost for the country's tourism and repute. Other ones think that hosting such a big event for just several months will cause significant problems for years. This article will help you inspect if an international event is good/bad for the country.
From my perspective, hosting these events will pull in hundreds of thousands of people, including athletes to the nation, therefore will intensely pull up the nation's tourism while besides attending competitive rounds, athletes and the crowds who come to watch the event will also take a tour around the country and introduce it to their homeland. Moreover, being chosen for the world-class sports event will increase the profile of the country, creating long-term and massive benefits for the economy. Besides these utilities, they will also grow the sport's traditions of the country and make their candidates doing better on incoming events.
On the other side, having a big sports event is not as great as our imaginations. A province, officially the capital, will have to pour big massive funds to build many sports facilities, leading to serious financial problems for a long time. Therefore, world-class or continental-class sports events will required developed countries rather than developing countries. Consequently, other branches like public health or education will suffer from the shortage of income for their actions and developments. Furthermore, having a massive flow rate of people come to see the event will also break the nation's security. As a result, many clashes, violence or even terrorism will happen when people from all the countries meet each other.
Summarizing all the reasons, hosting an international event is an opportunity, benefits and also bad effects. For me, creating big sports events is good, as it made people from overseas know about our traditions and cultures.
Do you have the same opinion?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...n, therefore will intensely pull up the nations tourism while besides attending competi...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...eover, being chosen for the world-class sports event will increase the profile of the ...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "required developed" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'developing' or 'to be developed'.
Suggestion: developing; to be developed
...ental-class sports events will required developed countries rather than developing countr...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...me to see the event will also break the nations security. As a result, many clashes, vi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27678571429 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86883612884 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5238328799 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8125 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25658723175 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102264744145 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785605591263 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160042382836 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970421999114 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.