Young children should not be given electronic gadgets.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
Electronic devices are becoming increasingly attractive and making human life very influent and easy. However, a wide section of society are of an opinion that young children should not be exposed to latest gadgets. I completely associate myself from this point of view. I admit that electronic gadgets have huge positive side than darker one but children might get extremely bad effect in the long run. Thus, children should be keep away from this type of devices. Ideas enunciated further in my discourse will support my point of view.
Discussing few points witch help to support my agreement, the foremost one is that less mental development of children. What I mean, children’s mind can not to be developed as much as it can be if children have addiction of latest devices. Thought process of child affected by it. Mind can not be think widely. Furthermore, use of electric devices for long time leads to low physical fitness. Sharpe vision ability loss it’s sharpness in long period. Children might be suffering from disease like obesity. As well as children lose it’s focus from their academic work. Academic knowledge for their carrier is neglecting by them which make direct effect on their future.
Additionally, I also perceive that electric devices like mobile phones, laptops, computers are only responsible to stop rising growth of extra skills. For example, communication skill of students can not be escalate significantly because they are preferring to use mobile instead of talking to others. What is more, children might be loss their social skills and they always stay away from social activity. Thus, homesickness is an crucial problem which should be solve to improvement of overall growth of children.
However, a diminutive class of community think that electronic device helps to improve knowledge. It also make child aware from day to day activity of all over the world. Children can improve their ability to use latest technology and become relax after playing online games.
To conclude, it is irrefutable fact that electronic device is really helpful in human life to make it easy and convenient. However, there are various drawbacks of it for children like physically weakness, lack of social and communication skill. Thus, youngsters should be kept distance from electronics machine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
...at young children should not be exposed to latest gadgets. I completely associate myself ...
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Line 1, column 431, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'kept'?
Suggestion: kept
... the long run. Thus, children should be keep away from this type of devices. Ideas e...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...as it can be if children have addiction of latest devices. Thought process of child affec...
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Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... be escalate significantly because they are preferring to use mobile instead of talking to oth...
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Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... social activity. Thus, homesickness is an crucial problem which should be solve t...
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Message: Did you mean 'solved'?
Suggestion: solved
...s is an crucial problem which should be solve to improvement of overall growth of ch...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hould be solve to improvement of overall growth of children. However, a diminu...
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Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ice helps to improve knowledge. It also make child aware from day to day activity of...
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Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'use the latest'.
Suggestion: use the latest
.... Children can improve their ability to use latest technology and become relax after playi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t for children like physically weakness, lack of social and communication skill. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, really, so, thus, well, for example, i mean, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7459359325 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569518716578 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7442452959 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.88 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.96 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.24 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221693732056 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625043101508 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655789118563 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126835316601 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475873781099 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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