Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theatre and less time on sport. How far do you agree with this statement?
It is sometimes argued that the young generation should pay the heed to traditional hobbies instead of playing the sport. While I disagree with this assertion, I do believe wholeheartedly that culture plays a vital role in life.
There are compelling reasons illustrating that sport is an indispensable part of the development of people. It is apparent that sport can relieve numerous health problems such as obesity, heart attack, and so on. If a person only eats, works or pays attention to other activities without having sport habit, they will not only be suffered from diseases but also get pressure. Besides, people will mix their peers through the club. They can make friends, play together, and tighten the relationship. Therefore, it is of the utmost importance for the young generation to spend time on sport.
On the other hand, teenagers also draw attention to cultural activities. First of all, traditional culture is important because it helps people connect with the history of their country. For example, schools often organize extra-curriculum activities to the museum for students to sink in the historical value. Secondly, not only having good health but also listening to vibrant songs can make them creative. In fact, children in the womb go as far as to be listened to music due to this advantage. Hence, there are a rich variety of reasons why adolescents should retain traditional activities.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that the benefits of placing emphasize on culture outweigh the drawbacks. However, a passion for the sport is also of great prominence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18992248062 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89897866136 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9770782374 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.6875 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6875 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225121610878 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619625473299 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523696247721 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119236229609 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405645469589 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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