Young people who commit crimes should be treated the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today, some people suppose that young crimes should be treated the same way as adults. From my standpoint, I am totally unconvinced that adolescents have the same punishments like the adults. There should be less strict rules since their age are not suitable for those punishments.
The reasons why i don't agree with the statement that the same treatment towards youngsters and old offenders because young people don't have enough maturity and experience. This is to say that they don't think about the impact results. Moreover, living in a unstandardized or lacking of care from parent can be easy to get into social evils such smoking, drinking or even using drug. Thus, committing a crimes tends to increase in the youth. If young people get into jail and suffer the same way as elderly people, it can bring lots of bad impacts on them. For instance, when they want to get a job, it can be very hard for them to be admitted as company don't want to them to disrupt the others.
To sum up, young criminals shouldn't be treat like the adults on account of these above reasons. Governments should consider this statements and families should take care of their children more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75490196078 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47903551212 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642156862745 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4535572977 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1818181818 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290244199797 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107520223344 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1022489489 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194561568102 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451757533067 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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