In the 21st century, many women have come out of their home to become what we call working women.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of women doing work?
In this competitive and contemporary world, a large number of women have stepped out of their homes to become independent working women. However, this scenario has its own pros and cons which I will discuss in the below paragraphs.
To begin with, an increase in the number of working women has made a great impact on the women empowerment movement. For example, we have many successful female public figures like Priyanka Chopra who won the Miss World contest, and this inspired many others. Furthermore, another benefit of a working lady in the house is having an additional hand for financial support. For example, due to an increase in inflation and other economic crisis, it is difficult for a husband, a father, or a son to meet the needs of the entire family. So, employed women can share the financial burden. In addition to these advantages, this trend has helped in raising the place of women in society. Moreover, it contributed to tearing down the social stigma that women should not work or be educated. For example, gender equality is now considered in the workplaces and people are becoming aware of the importance of educating a girl child which will enable her to make a career.
Although, there are some drawbacks to the growing number of working women. Firstly, kids do not get enough time from mothers who are working and there is a probability of kids getting indulged in wrong activities. For instance, the working hours in a private sector can be prolonged and this results in having less time for children and other family members. But, this situation can be tackled by considering work-life balance techniques. Secondly, females are more prone to health issues. To cite an example, meeting deadlines can make them stressed out and often leads to health issues like depression or anxiety. Nonetheless, following a proper diet, getting enough sleep and regular exercise can be helpful in maintaining good health. Thirdly, females often face sexual harassment at the workplace. Still, implementing strict rules to punish the offender can help in curbing this awful act.
To conclude, in my opinion, the advantages of a surging number of working women outweighs its disadvantages. In fact, it is a need of the hour that more and more women should consider being employed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h will enable her to make a career. Although, there are some drawbacks to the growin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1921.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01566579634 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70664634926 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582245430809 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9151268266 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4761904762 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2380952381 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292268378392 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895956714719 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977208589164 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201471538807 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571705367442 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.