People aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives, but few people achieve it. What are the causes, and how to overcome it?
In this competitive and contemporary era, it has become difficult for people to maintain a work-life balance. Admittedly, work pressure, financial crisis, and inflation have resulted in such a situation as humans have to work hard to meet their needs. In this essay, I will discuss the causes of the imbalance between work and life, and proffer solutions to it.
With the modernization, the standard of living has increased which had influenced the population to put their maximum efforts in order to compete with the world. In fact, this will help them to maintain social status by having access to a variety of new editions of brands. For example, people tend to indulge in a second job to gain an extra income and some might work overtime. Thus, humans are left with less time and fail in achieving the balance between work and life. Similarly, another factor contributing to such a situation is the financial crisis as nowadays the majority of the population is under debt or loans which further paved the way to work additional hours. However, this situation can be tackled if there is a mutual contribution of government and individuals.
Firstly, individuals should understand their needs and prioritize the necessities instead of comparing their lifestyle with others. Secondly, the government should establish strict rules for working hours for private and government organizations. Thirdly, the nation's administration should consider providing relaxed interest on loans and control inflation. These steps can definitely help humankind to be in a more comfortable situation and will not rush for working extra hours as the same time can be utilized for a family or other personal activities.
To summarize, work-life equilibrium is of utmost importance as this affects the overall health and well-being of the person. By implementing new strategies like focusing on main necessities or with government interference and support, this situation can be solved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20127795527 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88362685183 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552715654952 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 313.0 20.2975951904 1542% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1628.0 106.682146367 1526% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 313.0 20.7667163134 1507% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 115.0 7.06120827912 1629% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164722590371 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164722590371 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970146445824 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750060050868 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 159.6 13.0946893788 1219% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -246.22 50.2224549098 -490% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 125.4 11.3001002004 1110% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.36 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.65 8.58950901804 275% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 127.2 10.1190380762 1257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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