nowadays more and more movies and music are available on internet at free of cost \. this is positive or negative development. give valid reasons.
With the advancement of technology, people are having cost less and easy access to various kinds of platforms, apps, and websites to enjoy different genres of movies and music. Some opine with the fact that it is a positive change and while others consider it as a negative development. this essay will discuss both views and will reach a final conclusion.
To begin with, watching pictures or listening to songs on the internet has helped humans to refresh their minds in this competitive world. Furthermore, such accessibility has helped to overcome stress and anxiety. Moreover, it is convenient, comfortable, and cheaper to have the advantage of such feats of technology. For example, covid-19 paved the way to tough times for the world. Hence, apps like Netflix, Amazon Prime, Hungama, etc. made our life easier by providing a means for entertainment.
However, in contrast with the above, the usage of the internet for these activities had become so trendy as a result of which humans are spending most of their leisure time on numerous sites offering such services. For instance, nowadays, children can be seen wasting plenty of time watching videos and listening to music. They are not at all bothered to talk to their parents and so is the case for the parents' scenario. As a consequence of this, it has become a hindrance for family communication and wise usage of time for other important activities such as exercise, studies, and socializing.
To conclude, I strongly believe that anything which comes free has a cost that cannot necessarily be monetary but physically or mentally. we humans have to analyze to utilize the technology in a more efficient manner by which we will not become addicted and can manage social well-being effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95532646048 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67975584523 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 291.0 20.2975951904 1434% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1442.0 106.682146367 1352% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 291.0 20.7667163134 1401% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 140.0 7.06120827912 1983% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14091603639 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14091603639 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078796231919 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410596254778 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 147.4 13.0946893788 1126% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -223.89 50.2224549098 -446% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 116.8 11.3001002004 1034% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.97 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.68 8.58950901804 264% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 118.4 10.1190380762 1170% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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