It is evident that a healthy body resides in a healthy mind. In order to keep fit, people are indulged in many activities in the form of exercise or in the form of competitions. However, there is a huge need for many people to involve in physical activities.
Exercise keeps the body fit and healthy. Due to increased industrialization, people are busy in their professional lives and doing chores. Therefore, it is very important for working-class individuals to indulge in some sort of physical activity. It can be in any form such as dance classes, aerobics, yoga or they can even go to the gym and sweat out there. The main advantage behind the workout is that one feels active and fresh all day long. Along with that, it is also beneficial for many health diseases such as obesity, cholesterol, blood pressure, and health related issues.
Individuals can be encouraged to do workouts by presenting them the advantages of taking part in games or adopting any sport in their curriculum. Some people are in the opinion that in order to grab the position or medals in worldwide gaming competitions, people should be boosted to prepare for tough competitions like as in such as Olympics. Keeping this in mind, the government has included a sports subject which is compulsory for every child in all the schools so that they can develop their interest in games sports. Moreover, It has inaugurated many sports stadiums in almost all cities.
To conclude, I accord with the perspective of encouraging people to involve in sports activities more than in exercise. The reason being a person will automatically remain fit and healthy under the influence of achieving or aiming a high goal.
- Some people believe that the museums and historic sites should be open for free for children under 18 To what extent do you agree or disagree 68
- Some people say that all mobile cell phone conversations should be banned in public and crowded places Others disagree Discuss both sides and give your own opinion 73
- Adults do less exercise nowadays Some think that people can be encouraged to live healthy lives through sporting events such as the Olympics or the World Cup Others think that there are better ways to encourage adults for exercise Discuss both views an 84
- Some people believe that universities should only offer places to students with high marks while other believes that people of all ages should be allowed even they don t do well in school Discuss both views and give your opinion 95
- Recent advances in air travel have focused only on those sitting in upper class and have left other passengers with no benefits To what extent do you agree or disagree 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, therefore, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92657342657 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90810104528 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573426573427 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7749378363 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215316158292 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065608099688 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379718192177 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124814041942 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233248047318 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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