Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or a sports personality, brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own experience or knowledge
Throughout history, being a celebrity has been a dream for majority of people. However, being a famous person whether nationally or worldwide, can be considered as a double-edged weapon. Although fame can bring many benefits, it brings a plethora of problems as well.
Embarking upon the benefits, being a famous film star or an international sports personality, gives access for travelling worldwide and visiting many different places as a part of the job. Whether for shooting movies' scenes or joining international festivals, in addition to representing a team in a championship or a sports festive. Moreover,, being a celebrity allows a person to have a positive effect on people specially youth. For instance, Mohammed Salah - a famous Egyptian football player - became the number one star for all youth in Egypt. Therefore, he was chosen for some advertising campaigns that aimed to show the hazardous effects of drugs and smoking. In turn, statistics showed a noticeable decline in the numbers of drug addicts and smokers across Egypt.
On the contrary, there is a cost for being a celebrity, which can appear in the form of some problems that chase the celebrities. For example, people give themselves the right to invade the celebrities' personal life in a rude behavior. Hence, many celebrities can not simply wear what they like, or even enjoy themselves with their families, knowing that they are being followed everywhere. Furthermore, celebrities should always pay more attention to their actions and what they say. As they will be over criticized for any unintentional mistake. Even more, they can face sudden hatred due to a different opinion, a bad role in a movie, or even for not scoring a goal in a football match.
In conclusion, although being a well-known celebrity brings a lot of benefits; nevertheless, it also brings many problems. And from my perspective, the problems and the suffering outweigh the benefits.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-10 | erman..duran95 | 78 | view |
| 2019-12-23 | PALAK AHUJA | 11 | view |
| 2019-12-13 | maryamazizmohammadi1366 | 61 | view |
| 2019-11-25 | Ahmed Shehata | 89 | view |
| 2019-10-19 | aryaashwin | 73 | view |
- Some people think that it is beneficial for children to do paid work, while others think that it can be harmful for children.What are the advantages and disadvantages of children doing paid work? 73
- Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experi 67
- some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- People in allmodern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.Discuss the ca 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...s for travelling worldwide and visiting many different places as a part of the job. Whether fo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a sport' or simply 'sports'?
Suggestion: a sport; sports
...epresenting a team in a championship or a sports festive. Moreover,, being a celebrity a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
...ampionship or a sports festive. Moreover,, being a celebrity allows a person to ha...
^^
Line 5, column 506, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...famous Egyptian football player - became the number one star for all youth in Egy...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2101910828 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02177245945 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595541401274 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0734145762 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2352941176 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344837799426 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105861178975 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062254588901 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220097584336 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486813750328 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.