Being a celebrity-such as a famous film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, well-known movie actors and actresses and reputable athletes have VIP position all over the world and are so glad to be adorable in everywhere, but it is clear not have suitable private life for these people. However, I imagine the celebrities have more advantages.
To begin with, the celebrities have a specific condition to use each opportunity like taking part in a lot of well-known fashion ceremonies and the events are definitely going to bring a huge amount of marvelous chance to be watched throughout the universe. Every time I surf on the Internet for knowing regarding to last news for famous singers and artists who always expensive dresses and suits, I can find them in their best mood by a magic smile.
However, by looking at other aspects of their life, being as a celebrity never is easy. Every place around a celebrity there are some photographers and reporters and totally too many disturbers. It is very common to find a lot of information regarding to the well-known people in the news. Some of the paper really damage to the celebrities’ life and they is no way to manage the awkward circumstance just accept the situation. For instance, private information about a nice couple in our cinema easily broadcast on the Internet.
In conclusion, I believe not only will the celebrities have been in the best situation for living but also they are able to manage some problems with their positions. The better opportunities they have the more patient they should be
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, regarding, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93700787402 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87050805253 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610236220472 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5343541947 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185890162317 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702168628972 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036968605596 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110801725007 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105523350626 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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