You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home.
Write a letter to the council. In your letter
*say how you heard about the plan
*explain how you feel about it
*ask for more information about
Dear Madam,
I am writing to find out about construction a mall near my inhabitant. I have saw the poster regarding to your project on the Internet. I imagine the mall will be a very exciting opportunity as an entertainment. But some neighbors suppose having a shopping center like that will have been a unsuitable construction around the area, they realize not only will it be an unreasonable plan but it also will damage the natural environment.
For the situation, I would be grateful if you could give some information regarding to the project. I look forward to nearing from you.
Faith fully yours,
Maryam Azizmohammadi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'sawed', 'sawn', 'seen'.
Suggestion: sawed; sawn; seen
...ction a mall near my inhabitant. I have saw the poster regarding to your project on...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...arding to your project on the Internet. I imagine the mall will be a very excitin...
^
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hopping center like that will have been a unsuitable construction around the area...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 532.0 937.175257732 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 106.0 206.0 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01886792453 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2086804361 3.78020617076 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08282775787 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 127.690721649 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.72641509434 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 167.4 290.88556701 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3752813217 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166279295988 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070329659471 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502836689725 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914621860546 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069007553301 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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