In Britain when someone gets old they go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after then. sometimes the government has to pay for their care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is no question that caring about elder people is of crucial importance nowadays. Unfortunately, not everybody has a possibility to support their elderly relatives at home so the using of nursery homes has become the normal practice. this, however, leads to the logical question – who should cover up the cost for this care. In my view, it should be the government’s responsibility to provide the better life for citizens of all ages.
Undoubtedly, the retirement home is the most common way to organize care for old people. Furthermore, in some countries governments pay for it. As we mentioned before these municipal institutes cheer the relatives as well as elderly people themselves. For instance, the people of old age can be sick and disabled and this is unbearable for relatives not only mentally but very often financially.
Nevertheless, there is still people who believe that government should not spend the taxpayers’ money for this. Their opinion is based on the principles of ethic. this category of people sure that people should support their older parents till the last day, and this is in their responsibility to pay for nursery home.
In my personal view, we need to consider each case as an individual one. but I am inclined to be thinking that the government should be in charge for supporting the retirement homes. Moreover, our taxes are not a huge part of overall expenses, but it could make the life easier for those who give us all an opportunity to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, well, for instance, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98015873016 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96397227471 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.089011062 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6428571429 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367201191431 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121615455602 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726226002214 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221128505781 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553443085307 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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