Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
there is no question that cultural traditions and customs make a significant impact on the national identity. However, sometimes it can create difficulties for people relations. Some people keen to believe that foreigners must follow the lifestyle of local communities while others think that the countries should create perfect conditions for everybody. Let us consider both these views.
it is undeniable, that we all live in modern world of globalization. Thus, there are less and less boarders between the countries, visas and other limits. As a result, the tourism and immigration are rapidly growing nowadays. For example, eu consists of dozen countries which have possibility for their citizens to work abroad without restrictions. The cultural differences between countries can play a crucial role in the existence of eu. Due to that fact, the governments are trying to make a comfort living environment for every citizen despite on his country of origin. many people sure that the officials do not make enough actions in this direction.
On the other hand, there are lots of people who believe that the respectful interactions between communities are the only way to success for the whole society. For instance, many tourist of fresh immigrants continue to live their own way like in a home country not trying to assimilate. Moreover, they often make conflicts with locals showing their disrespect for the country that give them a better life.
Personally, I strongly believe that only respectful attitude and treatment to neighbors can make any issues much easier. As an example, I would like to say that I sure that no one would be happy if the guests of the house are not respectful for the order of things in it. Therefore, in my opinion the piece on the whole globe depends on people’s tolerance and understanding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85645273411 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593333333333 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2049146906 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7647058824 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228771243206 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635386234234 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682729068305 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139129337459 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869893408206 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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