Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Globally, deteriorating environmental conditions, increase in population and literacy management are fundamental challenges. In Pakistan water shortage, high polulation, and extreme weather, will be severe threats during next decade. This essay will discuss aforementioned problems and put forward some solutions.
Pakistan is a developing country and affluent natural resources are not adequately managed. Although it receives a substantive amount of rain every year, which leads to sometimes flooding of rivers, but there is a rise in the shortage of drinking water. It is said that by 2035 Pakistan will become a water scarce country, if timely corrective measures are not taken. Similarly the population growth rate is above 2.5% annually, which can lead to over population of the urban areas. Pakistan will face severe weather change in future due to urbanization and deforestation. The temperature in the southern areas has touched 58 degree celcius, which is unbearably hot for human beings.
Although, the above mentioned problems are chronic in nature and it will take time to find optimal solutions. But following recommendations can dilute the impact of these issues: Firstly, for the water shortage there should be construction of dams, becasue they can store water in large quantities, which can be used during draughts. Secondly, public awarness should be created regarding increase in population via print, electroinic and social media. Difficulties faced in congusted urban areas should be elaborated to stop mass urbanization. Thridly, to tackle with extreme weather, a mass compaign should be launched for plantation: furthermore, there should be a target of planting atleast one billion trees every year.
To conclude, no doubt it will be a tough time ahead and if there is not adequate planning now we will face unsolvable problems. So it is better to plan atleast for next two decades, as it is said "a stitch in time saves nine".
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Similarly,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, as to, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44117647059 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98993891533 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9947370285 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261979517787 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077687514442 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411805187476 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150176914234 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317555108284 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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