Write about the following topic:
Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.
What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Poverty is a global phenomenon, whether it is a developed or an under-developed country there must be a certain percentage of needy people. There are plethora of reasons for poverty, but this essay will discuss unemployment and illiteracy as primary reasons for poverty; moreover, some of solutions such as, skill development, subsidised education and SME's loans by government will also be putforwarded in this essay.
To begin with, UN defines poor, if a household has less than 2 dollars of daily income; however, it varies from country to country, regardless of the definition the reasons behind impoverishment is not unique. These are the two paramount reasons for the aforementioned issue; Firstly, poor people don't have any source of income and they struggle to get basic necessaties. Poor people are stuck in a vicious circle, since they do not have the capital to start any business or groom themselves to get employed. The second reason is quite interconnected with the first one, it is observed that most of the financially deprived people are illiterate. They are not aware of the processes or methods to get a job or start a business.
Although poverty is a chronic issue and can not be solved straigh away, some of these recommendations can be fruitful. The unemployed youth can be eqiupped with professional skills via vocational trainings, government can offer these courses in state owned schools in evening to avoid initial capital investmenet on infrastructure. There can be subsidy on education specifically till the elementary schools, further more it will not be significant burden on pocket if state or NGO's to sponsor cost of books and stationary for the attendants under subsidy program. Governemnt can also announce merit loans for small medium enterprizes, as a result people can start new businesses which can in turn give job to multiple individuals.
To summarize, poverty is a universal problem, nevertheless governments can take corrective measures to tackle this predecament by equpping people with education, skills, and investements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the solutions') or simply say ''some solutions''.
Suggestion: some of the solutions; some solutions
... primary reasons for poverty; moreover, some of solutions such as, skill development, subsidised ...
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Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rementioned issue; Firstly, poor people dont have any source of income and they stru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29393939394 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14069383408 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3107037061 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.583333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288563564475 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941251110405 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424179864525 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146587269 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512378759794 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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