Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment.
What do you think can be done to solve this problem?
Nowadays, the world enviromental problem is in serious situation and getting worse, is included deforestration. this problem has to tackle with each country and has to prevent to increasing a deforestration. In this essay we will focus on some suitable suggestions to overcome.
Basically the role of forest is residence of animal or flora purifying water and a photosynthesis. leaving animals and floras in a forest are supported basic food chain, but if the basic food chain is collapsed then many species may be exposed to extinction and will be bloke down. Moreover, the leaf of tree work as photosynthesis, this function is inhealing carbondioxide and exhaling oxygen. Despite the atmosphere is cleaned of leaves, the trees are cut and increasing a pollution. it is affected to global warming.
deforestration is caused by a variety of reasons, for instance, for building a house as resources making a paper or magzine and a toilet paper, the most reason is spent for papers. we consume plenty amount of paper in daily life. However, i can suggest to possible solution to this problem. Firstly, we could choose renewable paper intentionally and after use, the paper may be recycled again. Secondly, the government should regulate a law about the limit of extended deforest. Otherwise, it will be over deforested by illegal deforestration. what is more, the government could be supported a program that to plant trees.
As a conclusion, we should recognise individual what we can do and what we can solve for preventing deforestration. I believe that solution could be effective and helpful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for instance, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20384615385 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18095990499 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5991157148 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5882352941 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229892718632 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609867921811 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051243276451 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131403720893 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478423841802 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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