There is no doubt that modernization has placed our traditional values and lifestyles on the verge of extinction. Although it is important to embrace the blessings provided by modernization, it does not mean that we should abandon our ancestral way of living. In my opinion, preserving the conventional ways of life is extremely essential as it represents our past and makes us unique from the rest of the world.
To begin with, there are plethoras of reasons for maintaining our traditional lifestyle. Firstly, it distinguishes one nation from another. This is because, each and every country is unique by its own culture and heritage, which had taken a thousand years for a nation to attain. In other words, this connects us with our ancestors, and reminds us how our nation has evolved throughout the periods. For instance, in Bangladesh, majority of the males wear a traditional dress called “Panjabi” during the New Year festival, which has been passed down from generation to generation. Secondly, traditional remedies are still being used to treat many diseases. While modern societies have access to advanced medical health care services, native people rely on herbal medicines, which have no adverse side effects. Therefore, it is quite evident that traditional ways of life are inextricably linked to our day to day life.
Both government and individual citizen have to play a major role in conservation of our traditional lifestyle. With regards to the former, it can make people aware of the conventional values that our predecessors have bestowed upon us through campaigns or seminars. Moreover, government can encourage schools to teach their students about our primitive way of living so that they can keep this tradition alive. As for the latter, instead of getting carried away by modernization, every individual should practice their age-old customs and rituals more often. People ought to realize that no matter how much modern we become, we can never escape from our root.
In conclusion, it is not hard to see that traditional ways of life gives us the opportunity to explore our past as well as our origin. So, its importance cannot be denied. With the help of government and individual, we would be able to save it from disappearance.
- Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world Some people think that this can not be changed while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change Discuss both views and give your opinion 96
- The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve a crime Do you agree or disagree 95
- More developing countries are given aid from international organizations to help them in their development plans Some people argue that financial aid is important but others suggest that practical aid and advice are more important Discuss both views and g 92
- In some societies the number of crime committed by teenager is growing Some people think that regardless of age teenagers who commit major crime should receive adult punishment To what extend do you agree 92
- Both government and individuals are spending too much money protecting animals and their habitat This money should be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and health care To what extent do you agree 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...abi” during the New Year festival, which has been passed down from generation to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12938005391 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95011722415 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579514824798 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2191235509 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.157894737 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5263157895 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78947368421 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409527013273 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113578184809 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808985248186 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253984657411 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199552769547 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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