Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents are the best teachers.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
It is an irrefutable fact that a child’s best mentors are parents. I, however, do not completely agree with the idea that the parents overtake the teachers in terms of teaching their children. this thorny issue has raised a bone of contention which I will be discussing in the following paragraphs.
First of all, for all parents their child is an intelligent and smart child. They are biased when it comes to their own child. As a result, they often assume as well teach them inappropriate things. parents can teach their child the moral values, intricacies of life, discipline etc. nowadays, the trend of home-schooling has increased resulting that the parents are teaching their child themselves at home. For instance, one of my friend’s mother used to train her maths but she herself was not much proficient about the subject so consequently, he failed the exam. so, looking at this instance we can say that parents are not the best teachers all the time.
Secondly, parents are not aware of the advancements in the education system therefore, they teach their children the same ages-old method. With the innovations being introduced, now there are smart classes being conducted for children almost in every school. Also, there are so many fun-loving activities through which a child learns a lot and enjoys. Parents cannot cope up with the progressions being made in the learning methods because they are now out of the system and the teachers being in the system are mindful of the inventions.
To put it in a nutshell, without a teacher help a parent cannot shape up a child and his future because parents are biased towards their child and teachers are well aware of the new innovations and techniques.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94482758621 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75951709574 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558620689655 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7612715639 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0878446177637 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335611686628 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277873267682 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600156931814 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289274737337 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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