[In the name of God]
Cultural globalisation is one of the important issues that has seriously challenged developing countries due to the increasing advancement of technology and communications. Globalisation is a phenomenon which has various areas of religion, culture, politics, and economics around the world. Some researchers believe that traditional ways of life are under threat and something should be done to preserve the culture. Yet for some, cross-cultural exchanging is embraced and may ultimately leads to the creation of a single global system.
The astonishing growth of technology in matters such as transportation, telecommunications, and as a result, internet and virtual world, intensifies globalization. Some cite this is the best opportunity to introduce their culture and get to know other cultures; however, they are practically neglecting their own culture and following the western or eastern ones. Consequently, we will face an identity crisis in countries that do not have a rich culture.
One of the most important and unique aspects of culture is literature. Since English, the main language of business, has been spreading globally, some languages are in danger of extinction. Therefore, some countries are trying to protect their literature. In Germany, for example, even if you are a foreign student or intern, you must speak in German and not in English. Or if you want to enter the water borders of Iran, you must get permission in Persian.
Ironically, it cannot be said that in the age of globalization and technology, cultures must remain original without the slightest change. Rather, they can survive by logical interaction with other cultures and identities. For example, the culture of respect for elders can be learned from the Orientals.
In conclusion, there are clearly benefits and negative effects of globalisation. However, countries with rich religious and cultural background are not expected to change much. But many grass-roots organizations and governments have to make efforts to guarantee the protection and rejuvenation of their culture.
- It is a natural process when animal species become extinct There is no reason why people should stop happening this Do you agree or disagree 78
- Due to effects of globalisation the cultures of some countries are influenced by others Some people think this is a natural process Others think this is a threat to cultural identity What is your opinion about this 84
- Some people think that technological progress has affected their lives To what extent do agree or disagree with the statement 56
- Some people argue that technological progress is always positive Others dispute this What is your view and why 80
- The graph shows Internet Usage in Taiwan by Age Group 1998 2000 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5248447205 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28579207131 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60248447205 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7398732287 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239545827121 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613724380389 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528358871064 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966928040302 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602871932794 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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