Even though globalization affect the world’s economic in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
The advantageous and disadvantageous impact of globalization on the economy around the world has evolved as a controversial topic nowadays. While globalization has created various breakthroughs for world’s economy, I strongly believe that these drawbacks should not be underestimated.
It is irrefutable that globalization could enable world’s economic thrive. With paralleled with globalization, the government may delete economic tax barrier hence the import and export products of emerging countries happen conveniently. This results in increasing the total GDP and breaking the poverty of any inferior counties that take part in trade free. Furthermore, when many countries connect with each other, multinational companies may have chances to widen their economic scale by constructing various building or headquarters in developing country. Which means that it will create more job vacancies and consequently the unemployment rate could decrease significantly. Also, the developing could be able to make use of the advanced technology, the top-notch facilities, the management skills to enrich our knowledge.
On the other hand, I am in favor the idea that globalization could have some adverse effects. Regarding culture, with the widespread of the Internet or social media, the proliferation of foreign shows, music, films has easily for people especially young generation to approach than ever before. This may lead to the young imitate unconscious foreign culture and neglect their own traditional identities and cultural erosion will occur sooner or later. For example, there are some adolescents dress sexy costume to visit formal locations such as pagodas or churches. Another negative effect is the widespread of epidemic diseases quickly. This is because people could travel freely and easily with the reduction of geography barrier between countries. Therefore, they could bring fatal diseases together through the airport and the boom of epidemic disease may be inevitable.
In conclusion, although there are some beneficial to world’s economic including boosting the economic development of the developing countries and creating more opportunities for they to study experiences, I am firmly convinced that the drawbacks about culture and health are more serious to consider than benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85882352941 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17651960746 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626470588235 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6659290656 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119057386819 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414578872618 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541160039591 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848148531534 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467066761044 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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