Nowadays, new technologies have a significant effect on all spheres of people's life, and the Internet influences all kinds of media. People could approach the latest news by a variety of channels such as traditional newspaper, internet and broadcast and some people assert that newsprint remains the centre position while I believe the printed publication would be replaced gradually.
First of all, people could acquire the needed information by accessing the relevant websites without limitation of time and venue. An adult could be receiving the online news through any electronic devices when he is handling other matters such as shopping, eating and even walking, and feel free to suspend and resume reading without consideration of carrying clumsy papers. Secondly, the internet delivers news to individuals faster like the breaking news reach people instantly without printing process, and this phenomenon gives people an opportunity for fast response and indirectly contribute our society a better efficiency. Additionally, internet news as paperless publication is more beneficial to the environment than conventionally printing presses which produced with tons of wood material, lots of electricity and many delivery trucks.
Nevertheless, it is true that the long-term cultivated reading habit of people could not be easily transformed. Many mature adults are used to be reading printed news routinely, and their lives seem incomplete without talking hold of early morning newspapers. Also, many people argue that older generations should be accustomed to the papers because of their poor literacy computer skills. However, few can deny that education and training can help the aged people to catch up the knowledge. As statistics prove, the number of internet users in the age group above 60 keep increasing.
So I conclude by saying both sources -- the Internet and the newspaper – have different ways of being utilised. But, from my perspective on this topic, the internet seems to be more useful and information-providing as compared to the newspaper. I wouldn’t say that newspapers have no use since there is the internet, but all I’m saying is that the Internet has the most benefits and may ultimately replace the paper in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, such as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46306818182 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99255818745 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644886363636 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7144656348 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.357142857 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241503268314 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757008038351 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032661885792 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136688240449 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358986186311 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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