Dear Michelle,
Trust that you are well. It’s been too long since we were last in touch in Singapore. I suppose you would be surprised to hear that I will come to Queenstown next month for a professional study program. Hope we can have a chance of eating together, I cannot wait to talk to you.
The program that I enrolled is a specialist diploma that providing theoretical knowledge of construction management, and it will take me approximately 6-9 months from May. However, most of my classes are scheduled in the morning of weekdays which means I would be free for the weekdays’ afternoon and weekends. Thus, I am planning to have a part-time job that could cater to my living cost and help me to blend into the local culture.
Could you help me to check with local companies that you familiar for part-time job openings? It would also be great if you can help me to keep an eye on the local newspaper and inform me if any works suitable for me.
Best Regards,
Oscar.
- In some cities there are few controls on the design and construction of homes and other buildings and owners can decide on the style of their houses Do the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks 81
- Accomodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas . Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ? 78
- Children spend much time on TV, Video, and PC games. Some people believe it is good for them while others believe that is bad. Discuss these two views and give your opinions. 73
- even though people read news using the internet nowadays newspaper still are an important source of information for the general public .do you agree or disagree with the statement. 89
- Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems. While others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 90
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, then, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63428571429 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64637449337 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674285714286 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9110778158 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195676557936 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746215969559 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900418723945 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147196275649 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710830907951 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.